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ShinTre_Admin Admin
Number of posts : 3438 Age : 42 Location : Alpharetta, GA Points : 126 Rep! : 29 Registration date : 2008-12-02
| Subject: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:25 pm | |
| First topic message reminder :
This thread is for: * custom techniques * storyline characters * stealing permits * path related items * overall, things that need to be approved
Make it clear what you're asking about and it shall be replied to. Just make sure to add all relevant information as well as a bio link. | |
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Antifreke Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2378 Registration date : 2009-03-03
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 07, 2010 11:03 am | |
| haha, stock board it is.. and for my henchmen, do they need to be cleared as well? 2 Teksearcher [science and engineering] 10 Agent [Brawl, MA Fighting, Pistol Play] | |
| | | ShinTre_Admin Admin
Number of posts : 3438 Registration date : 2008-12-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 07, 2010 12:52 pm | |
| those are included w/checkpt 1, go ahead and throw em up to be updated | |
| | | Antifreke Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2378 Registration date : 2009-03-03
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:02 pm | |
| roger that, I will add it now.. I also hit up the stock board.. its got cobwebs on it.
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| | | Psi Prince Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2610 Location : Los Angeles, California Rank : Divine Prince Points : 96 Rep! : 96 Registration date : 2009-03-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 07, 2010 3:39 pm | |
| Ability 1: Pure Affinity (passive) Being supernatural creatures who excel in battle, these Kami have learned to utilize support and light magic in conjunction with offensive magic of matching alignment. Having a heightened bond to the Spiritual Arts, they are able to use all perfected abilities in their affinity at full strength at all times. Effect: Allows Kunashi Kami to use offensive affinity magic at full power, even with Light or Support; offensive magic tech must be perfected to deal destructive damage, technique drain over fierce is flat and cannot be lowered/reduced through training.
The drain is obviously Destructive b/c it allows Destructive damage, so it's obviously over fierce. So basically the drain is 25% instead of 17%?
Ability 2: Siphon Kunashi are taught to neutralize and control their opponents. This power was developed for that purpose. Dagger sized (or larger) spiritual energy talons are projected out at targets (+1 per level) and upon hitting them deals no damage, so they often don't even feel the strike, but within moments suddenly feel themselves drained of their energy. The talons vanish after draining the energy. Effect: Drains 5% stamina per level per target (( the lvl increases the drain plus the number of targets you're able to hit. taking 25 stamina from 5 ppl and trying to add 50% to urself is too much. ))
I only take 40% or 10 Stamina per target at perfected. Also, the honest likelihood of Mukhya facing off against 5 people in a real RP is pretty low. Add on the possibility of actually hitting all 5 targets and the 50 Stamina Absorb problem is even less likely.
The absorption is: Trained: 4 - 8 - 12 - 16 -20 Honed: 6 - 12 - 18 - 24 - 30 Mastered: 8 - 16 - 24 - 32 - 40 Perfected: 10 - 20 - 30 - 40 - 50 | |
| | | ShinTre_Admin Admin
Number of posts : 3438 Age : 42 Location : Alpharetta, GA Points : 126 Rep! : 29 Registration date : 2008-12-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:13 pm | |
| - Psi Prince wrote:
- Ability 1: Pure Affinity (passive)
Being supernatural creatures who excel in battle, these Kami have learned to utilize support and light magic in conjunction with offensive magic of matching alignment. Having a heightened bond to the Spiritual Arts, they are able to use all perfected abilities in their affinity at full strength at all times. Effect: Allows Kunashi Kami to use offensive affinity magic at full power, even with Light or Support; offensive magic tech must be perfected to deal destructive damage, technique drain over fierce is flat and cannot be lowered/reduced through training. The drain is obviously Destructive b/c it allows Destructive damage, so it's obviously over fierce. So basically the drain is 25% instead of 17%? drain will always be as if the tech is @ novice for attacks over fierce
Ability 2: Siphon Kunashi are taught to neutralize and control their opponents. This power was developed for that purpose. Dagger sized (or larger) spiritual energy talons are projected out at targets (+1 per level) and upon hitting them deals no damage, so they often don't even feel the strike, but within moments suddenly feel themselves drained of their energy. The talons vanish after draining the energy. Effect: Drains 5% stamina per level per target (( the lvl increases the drain plus the number of targets you're able to hit. taking 25 stamina from 5 ppl and trying to add 50% to urself is too much. )) I only take 40% or 10 Stamina per target at perfected. Also, the honest likelihood of Mukhya facing off against 5 people in a real RP is pretty low. Add on the possibility of actually hitting all 5 targets and the 50 Stamina Absorb problem is even less likely. nah. u can use the approved version or we can toss this one. the more it's brought up, the more i dun like this tech as u got it. you already got water loving for stamina. anymore discussion create a new thread in OOC to discuss your tech to keep this board clean of back and forth | |
| | | Psi Prince Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2610 Location : Los Angeles, California Rank : Divine Prince Points : 96 Rep! : 96 Registration date : 2009-03-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:36 pm | |
| I'll take the Kunashi Soulline, without Siphon... . I'll add the final ability to the Soulline later to avoid being "kazzed". Is it still ok to do that, add it later? Approved Version: - Kunashi Soulline wrote:
- Restriction: Only open to Exiled Kami (kami who have been exiled from Koushi; basically any kami not in Koushi)
- Spoiler:
The Kunashi were a faction of warrior kami who maintained the peace and order in Koutaku-shi before and following the Departure of Merkus from Heaven to Yochi. They were responsible for tracking down any wayward kami and dealing swift justice when necessary or simply banishing them. Their martial combat style was respected for its efficiency, precision, and incredible speed and agility. They were devoutly loyal to the Path of Good and Justice and the Will of Koutaku-Shi.
They watched as Merkus bestowed his blessings on the humans and watched as some with evil already in their hearts misused what they were taught. Feeling it an insult to Merkus' sacrifice for the mortals, the Kunashi went to their Masters to request to smite the mortals, but Heaven seeing no point in meddling in the affairs of Yochi denied the request. This gave way to anger forming in some of the Kunashi Kami and though they tried to hide and fight it, it became apparent in many of them. They themselves were to be exiled. Most found peace again thru meditation and dedication to their duties thus allowing them to remain, but some could not let go of their emotions and newfound desires, so they accepted their exile to the Realm of Mortals, Yochi.
For many years, the exiled Kunashi were defenders of the weak and justice, but as Heaven was absolute in drawing lines between good and evil, they were as well which made them feared by the mortals they were trying to protect. They retreated to an island in the east where they began to understand the complexity of mortals and perhaps even why Merkus sacrificed so much to love and guide them. They developed a flourishing society of tolerance and peace where they lived with humans and mystical creatures. The Kunashi remained warrior guardians in the realm, though their actions were more discrete and seemed like miracles. As the decades and centuries passed though, the Kunashi drifted apart losing the unity that once made them a feared force of heavenly justice and their society and villages that once prospered now lies in ruins swallowed by jungles. Every so often though, the remaining Kunashi take a new pupil or discover a descendant of their ancient soulline to train in the Kunashi Discipline.
Xformation: Krodha Transa Kunashi are exiled Kami who have learned to harness their furious nature to fuel and focus them in battle. These Kami are trained to fight as shock troops where speed kills faster than strength as they dispatch enemies with swiftness and precision. While in the Krodha Transa, a Kunashi can move and react at a level higher than most spirits. Effect: MOV +20% per level of control = +1 cat level at perfected; enables use of Soulline powers.
Ability 1: Pure Affinity (passive) Being supernatural creatures who excel in battle, these Kami have learned to utilize support and light magic in conjunction with offensive magic of matching alignment. Having a heightened bond to the Spiritual Arts, they are able to use all perfected abilities in their affinity at full strength at all times. Effect: Allows Kunashi Kami to use offensive affinity magic at full power, even with Light or Support; offensive magic tech must be perfected to deal destructive damage. Destructive Drains @ Novice.
Ability 2: Blessed Power Though they have fallen from grace, these Kami remain pure spirits of good fighting against evil and dark forces. The Kunashi Kami have learned to purify their spiritual energy to bless techniques used against evil or demonic opponents. Effect: Add Bless effects to a technique, additional drain is medium
Ability 3: Heavenly Construct The caster creates humanoid light spirit warrior construct that are able to fight independently of their caster. The number of warriors created depend on the control level of the technique (+1 per level). They can be easily defeated by cursed attacks. Effect: attributes and damage is Strong, Construct density = 5.
Ability 4: Siphon Kunashi are taught to neutralize and control their opponents. This power was developed for that purpose. Dagger sized (or larger) spiritual energy talons are projected out at targets (+1 per level) and upon hitting them deals no damage, so they often don't even feel the strike, but within moments suddenly feel themselves drained of their energy. The talons vanish after draining the energy. Effect: Drains 5% stamina per level per target, directs 1/3 of stolen stamina to user shin - this is approved. | |
| | | Antifreke Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2378 Age : 37 Location : Towson, MD Rank : Lightning Tiger Points : 12 Rep! : 18 Registration date : 2009-03-03
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:21 pm | |
| So, you gave the stock board for someone else. who isnt around.. I think we need another lottery coming up ^_^ Custom Technique that I know you will never allow!! Reverse Lightning In life, there comes a time where you must make a personal sacrifice for the greater good. Sometimes this means putting an enemy that you cant kill in an electrocution coma for days, keeping their body in a constant thriving pain. This technique, forbidden to use, can kill the user if not performed properly. By pushing your own purified energy into an opponent, instead of electricity, you can disrupt their entire body, electrocuting them from the inside for an extended period of time. The downside is that that purified energy is gone until the technique wears off. Effect : Paralysis+ Day per level. Can only be used once perfected Drain 2x Destructive. Stamina cost gone as long as technique is held - Approved Version. Shin wrote:
- Reverse Lightning
In life, there comes a time where you must make a personal sacrifice for the greater good. Sometimes this means putting an enemy that you cant kill in an electrocution coma for days, keeping their body in a constant thriving pain. This technique, forbidden to use, can kill the user if not performed properly. By pushing your own purified energy into an opponent, instead of electricity, you can disrupt their entire body, electrocuting them from the inside for an extended period of time. The downside is that that your purified energy must remain in the target for as long as the technique lasts. When the technique ends, you gain this energy back.
Effect: +Paralysis, lasts up to 1 per level, flat drain = all HP | |
| | | Antifreke Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2378 Age : 37 Location : Towson, MD Rank : Lightning Tiger Points : 12 Rep! : 18 Registration date : 2009-03-03
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Jul 08, 2010 7:57 pm | |
| Custom Technique 2 that I told you about.. like forever ago. Lightning Eater Being a master of electricity, Sanzon is able to redirect electricity and store it in his body. To do this, he can effectively "eat" lightning. When eating lightning, he can use the alternate energy as his own, essentially re-powering his body. It can be directed to heal his body, or give him a boost of energy up to his maximum. Effect : 20% of lightning level converted to HP/STA Drain : Can only be used at Perfected also.. Lightning Commandant : Allows me to cast strong or below spells once they are mastered without an incantation. Is this a passive technique, or do I have to level it up? new question and conserving space! So, lets say we take a single inheritance theory to our characters.. we are masters of our custom techs, and want to pass them down just like they were passed to us. Instead of another character making their own customs, can we teach them ours? - Approved Version. Shin wrote:
- Lightning Eater
Being a master of electricity, Sanzon is able to redirect electricity and store it in his body. To do this, he can effectively "eat" lightning. When eating lightning, he can use the alternate energy as his own, essentially re-powering his body. It can be directed to heal his body, or give him a boost of energy up to his maximum HP limit. Requires: Elemenyz Mode or equivalent Effect : negates Water Loving, converts offensive lightning attacks received 20% per level, to HP based on how much damage the attack would normally do (i.e. at Perfected, Sanzo receives back HP = damage attack would have done if it hit him).
Lightning Commandant (passive) Since you are so intuned with lightning, it allows a user to channel lower spells without an incantation. The wait time on the spell is the same as if there were a chant, but it does not have to be vocalized. This ability allows the user to cast up to strong spells once they are mastered without an incantation. Effect: nullchant spells under Strong, drain is Medium
- sexyA wrote:
- So, lets say we take a single inheritance theory to our characters.. we are masters of our custom techs, and want to pass them down just like they were passed to us. Instead of another character making their own customs, can we teach them ours?
knock urself out. they still gotta pay the same amt for customs and they lose those slots - Quote :
- responsive notes
So, I die to paralyze someone for 5 posts? yeeaa... ill figure out a different custom ^_^''''
The old lightning commandant thats cleared and already on my bio is better, so I'll just level that one up..
I got myself a successor of EOTL! Yea Baby!!
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| | | Kaguyalover Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2348 Age : 33 Location : Miami, Florida Rank : Kinos, Hitorinji Points : 71 Rep! : 20 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Sat Jul 10, 2010 1:51 pm | |
| Gorgyn Tainting A myth, a demon, a spawn of incest, a god and a sea monster related by blood hailing from The Great sea these treacherous creatures came from, but that was many, many, oh so many centuries ago and they are thought to be nothing more than a myth. Gorgyn Xformation This Xformation changes quite a bit of the user. Their hair transforms into new locks of living venomous snakes, which upon will can change to appear as regular hair. They grow wings of gold protruding out from their backs, obtain claws, their skin takes on the same texture as that of a serpent, their teeth changes to that of serpent fangs and their blood changes as well. With training, the user can make their appearance look like a regular human. Effect: attributes are Strong Gorgyn Blood Of legend it is said that depending upon the side to which the blood of the Gorgyn is drawn from acquires different affects. From the left side a instantly fatal poison, and from the right side of the Gorgyn it's been said that the healing properties of the Gorgyn's right side can even bring back the dead. Effect: blood causes K/O on injection (left side), blood holds miraculous healing properties; can revive others (right side) and nullify poison. Gorgyn's Gaze With a gaze so terrible legend speaks that it can turn anything that gazes upon it to stone. Making the user's very own sight their own worst enemy as it can turn anything that looks at them to stone, even themselves. Effect: encases those who gaze upon it into stone, bind strength increases +1 per level. Gorgyn's Curse According to legends these creatures were born of a incestuous love and thus their parents were that of a god and a sea monster to which the god lineage passed onto them and they acquired immortality. Living to roam the world forever, never to be loved for fear that there gaze would turn the one they love to stone and only accompanying one another. Effect: user remains living 1 post per level then they 'die' only to revive and respawn in the Great Sea. Gorgyn's Hair The hair of the Gorgyn is apart of itself as it's own beating heart, thus they are able to control the hair-snakes at their own will. The Snayke's hold dangerously venomous venom and the ability to turn others to stone. The user can even fire out the Snayke's as though they were projectiles, as once fired the Snayke can return on it's own or a new Snayke regrows in it's place. Effect: able to shoot 1 snake per level like projectiles, snakes cause poison / stone bind on bite - Approved Version. Shin wrote:
- i want taintings to be nature based. makin this a soulline.
Gorgyn Soulline A myth, a demon, a spawn of incest, a god and a sea monster related by blood hailing from The Great sea these treacherous creatures came from, but that was many, many, oh so many centuries ago and they are thought to be nothing more than a myth. Unlike other soullines, this soulline can be transfered in ways other than birth.
Gorgyn Xformation (passive) This Xformation changes quite a bit of the user. Their hair transforms into new locks of living venomous snakes, which upon will, can change to appear as regular hair. They grow wings of gold protruding out from their backs, obtain claws, their skin takes on the same texture as that of a serpent, their teeth changes to that of serpent fangs and their blood changes as well. With training, the user can make their appearance look like a regular human. Effect: attributes are Strong, able to hide appearance 20% per level
Gorgyn Blood (passive) In legend it is said that depending upon the side to which the blood of the Gorgyn is drawn from acquires different effects. From the left side a instantly fatal poison, and from the right side of the Gorgyn it's been said that the miraculous healing properties of the Gorgyn's right side can even bring back the dead. Effect: Left Side - blood causes poison on injection or K/O @ Perfected, Right Side - blood nullifies poison or heals 10% per level and nullifies K/O @ Perfected.
Gorgyn's Gaze (passive) With a gaze so terrible legend speaks that it can turn anything that gazes upon it to stone. Making the user's very own sight their own worst enemy as it can turn anything that looks at them to stone, even themselves. This encases those who gaze upon the user into stone. Effect: bind increases +1 per level, it takes 5 posts to fully stone a target, stone time decreases +1 per level.
Gorgyn's Curse (passive) According to legends these creatures were born of a incestuous love and thus their parents were that of a god and a sea monster to which the god lineage passed onto them and they acquired immortality. Living to roam the world forever, never to be loved for fear that there gaze would turn the one they love to stone and only accompanying one another. Effect: user remains living 1 post per level then they 'die' only to revive and respawn in the Great Sea.
Gorgyn's Hair The hair of the Gorgyn is apart of itself as it's own beating heart, thus they are able to control the hair-snakes at their own will. The Snayke's hold dangerously venomous venom and the ability to turn others to stone. The user can even fire out the Snayke's as though they were projectiles, as once fired the Snayke can return on it's own or a new Snayke regrows in it's place. Effect: snake density = 3, able to shoot 1 snake per level like projectiles, snakes cause Gorgyn's Gaze on bite. | |
| | | ShinTre_Admin Admin
Number of posts : 3438 Age : 42 Location : Alpharetta, GA Points : 126 Rep! : 29 Registration date : 2008-12-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Mon Jul 12, 2010 4:24 pm | |
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| | | Datorru Veteran
Number of posts : 679 Age : 37 Points : 0 Rep! : 3 Registration date : 2009-02-05
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Mon Jul 12, 2010 4:55 pm | |
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| | | Psi Prince Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2610 Location : Los Angeles, California Rank : Divine Prince Points : 96 Rep! : 96 Registration date : 2009-03-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Mon Jul 12, 2010 8:18 pm | |
| Request: I would like Staff status due to extensive amount of work you make me do. Namely site help board, critiquing soullines and taints as well as my duties as an NPC Mod/Quest Runner and content quality assurance specialist! Plus, I'm tired of Kyro pulling the "I'm staff and you're not, ha ha ha *does gay lil kid dance*" card. Oh and I guess I'll help out with staff updates like once a week. Just to make sure that Kyro isn't cheating. You gotta watch him, ya kno. | |
| | | aѕceпxion Ascended Tonberry
Number of posts : 6937 Age : 34 Location : California Points : 148 Rep! : 110 Registration date : 2009-01-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Mon Jul 12, 2010 8:23 pm | |
| Request: IP Ban Psi Prince for being extensively gay. | |
| | | Antifreke Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2378 Age : 37 Location : Towson, MD Rank : Lightning Tiger Points : 12 Rep! : 18 Registration date : 2009-03-03
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Mon Jul 12, 2010 11:02 pm | |
| I made notes in mine back at you instead of making a new post with all of the stuff ^_^ | |
| | | ShinTre_Admin Admin
Number of posts : 3438 Age : 42 Location : Alpharetta, GA Points : 126 Rep! : 29 Registration date : 2008-12-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Tue Jul 13, 2010 2:01 pm | |
| @psi - denied @esca - denied @anti - put it in a new post and highlight changes always look forwards never backwards ((i will now only check this board every OTHER day (or less) until i catch up w/the other review/edit stuff)) | |
| | | Psi Prince Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2610 Location : Los Angeles, California Rank : Divine Prince Points : 96 Rep! : 96 Registration date : 2009-03-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:56 am | |
| Path Checkpoint Approval: Lord Checkpoint 2 Current PWC = 59,228 Bio: Mukhya
Progress: 2/3 of Mandira Island belongs to Krodha (Mukhya) Gathered new allies, created trade agreement with Tara Mura, appointed Dainos the sprite as Herbalist of Mandira (reward for him from New Recipe quest), also improved relations with Caotang by restoring their magic well Attacked rival warlord on island and delivered flee, join, or die ultimatum to Wattu Tribe in south of island. Also subjugated two pirate gangs to serve me as privateers with legal license from Mandira to police our side of the waters between Mandira and Tara Mura
Requesting: Troop Increase from 50 to 500 to launch conquest campaign into R3 Increase in Tax Revenue from 1165 to 2335 Increase in Recognition of Mandira's existence and growing military strength Naval Control of Grid Sector S3 (Expansion of territory) Primary Exports from Mandira: Herbal/healing nectars, teas, & elixirs (made with ambrosia), gemstones, and Mercenaries
I would like to start building my Armada, err... Naval Defense Force... what is the breakdown for a Past Realm Warship?
Warship (or Galleon) Build points: x Repair points: x Strength: Strong or Ascended Resources needed: x Carries up to 50 units | |
| | | Antifreke Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2378 Age : 37 Location : Towson, MD Rank : Lightning Tiger Points : 12 Rep! : 18 Registration date : 2009-03-03
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:05 am | |
| Path Checkpoint 2 Approval : Building an Organization Current Path Wordcount : 54,100 PyraSim Organization
Future Realm : Finished school walkthroughs, dealt with transfer items Student council of "upper" students appointed, all magical NPC's Brought in members for enrollment Expanding influence in the lower commons
Past Realm : Getting a hand in political development Visited two separate Kingdoms [Domen and Psyre] Assisted in military pre-game
Requesting : Agents from 25 to 25 Interaction with other Syndicates in the Lower Commons, since recognition will be growing. Time to take some territory.. | |
| | | ShinTre_Admin Admin
Number of posts : 3438 Age : 42 Location : Alpharetta, GA Points : 126 Rep! : 29 Registration date : 2008-12-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:30 am | |
| - Psi Prince wrote:
- Path Checkpoint Approval: Lord Checkpoint 2
Current PWC = 59,228 Bio: Mukhya
Progress: 2/3 of Mandira Island belongs to Krodha (Mukhya) Gathered new allies, created trade agreement with Tara Mura, appointed Dainos the sprite as Herbalist of Mandira (reward for him from New Recipe quest), also improved relations with Caotang by restoring their magic well Attacked rival warlord on island and delivered flee, join, or die ultimatum to Wattu Tribe in south of island. Also subjugated two pirate gangs to serve me as privateers with legal license from Mandira to police our side of the waters between Mandira and Tara Mura
Requesting: Troop Increase from 50 to 500 to launch conquest campaign into R3 Increase in Tax Revenue from 1165 to 2335 Increase in Recognition of Mandira's existence and growing military strength Naval Control of Grid Sector S3 (Expansion of territory) Primary Exports from Mandira: Herbal/healing nectars, teas, & elixirs (made with ambrosia), gemstones, and Mercenaries
I would like to start building my Armada, err... Naval Defense Force... what is the breakdown for a Past Realm Warship?
Warship (or Galleon) Build points: x Repair points: x Strength: Strong or Ascended Resources needed: x Carries up to 50 units wasn't your path checkpoint 1 made at like 40k or somethin? i remember one of your path checkpoints was past the 25k mark also how many buildings do you currently have constructed? | |
| | | ShinTre_Admin Admin
Number of posts : 3438 Age : 42 Location : Alpharetta, GA Points : 126 Rep! : 29 Registration date : 2008-12-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:33 am | |
| - Antifreke wrote:
- Path Checkpoint 2 Approval : Building an Organization
Current Path Wordcount : 54,100 PyraSim Organization
Future Realm : Finished school walkthroughs, dealt with transfer items Student council of "upper" students appointed, all magical NPC's Brought in members for enrollment Expanding influence in the lower commons
Past Realm : Getting a hand in political development Visited two separate Kingdoms [Domen and Psyre] Assisted in military pre-game
Requesting : Agents from 25 to 25 Interaction with other Syndicates in the Lower Commons, since recognition will be growing. Time to take some territory.. ckpt 2 approved @ 54k | |
| | | Tsukai Intern
Number of posts : 367 Age : 38 Points : 0 Rep! : 10 Registration date : 2010-05-03
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:27 pm | |
| Here you goez: - Quote :
- » O'grr Pow'a (Passive)
O'grrs are known for their strength among demons. Their physical strength can grow as they delve deeper into their taint. Effect: +1 to strength attribute per level, -1 to speed overall - shin wrote:
- thx for pointing this out o.O
i got to think over it and i think i'ma just have magic reduced to balance this out... or something feel free to suggest an amendment on site suggestions but i'll ook over the pckage as a whole when i make the edit i'll get that description fixed appreciate it! | |
| | | Psi Prince Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2610 Location : Los Angeles, California Rank : Divine Prince Points : 96 Rep! : 96 Registration date : 2009-03-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:21 pm | |
| No, my checkpoint was reached around 25-28k but you froze updates for a month with the never-ending Dark Tourney. So I was around 35-38k when you finally let me post for it. Also, nowhere does it say that you have to have 25k words from the last approved checkpoint. As for the buildings, I have a full wall around the outpost, and two medium houses. We sleep in the trees and camp. We're nature folks in Mandira. ^_^ Again tho, I don't see anything that requires you to have a certain number of structures before I can advance, but the need for more Carpenters brings me to a Site Suggestion... - shin wrote:
- you coulda posted @ any time, it just wasn't gonna be updated to after the saga
that aint an excuse you gotta wall? who made this wall, you aint got no carpenter son! but that's fine the chkpts approved @ 60k
Troop Increase from 50 to 500 to launch conquest campaign into R3 - approved Increase in Tax Revenue from 1165 to 2335 - approved Increase in Recognition of Mandira's existence and growing military strength - sure Naval Control of Grid Sector S3 (Expansion of territory) - that's an ic thing, not an approval thing Primary Exports from Mandira: Herbal/healing nectars, teas, & elixirs (made with ambrosia), gemstones, and Mercenaries - add hair products and it's approved
boats haven't been set up yet that sounds like a site suggestion | |
| | | Antifreke Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2378 Age : 37 Location : Towson, MD Rank : Lightning Tiger Points : 12 Rep! : 18 Registration date : 2009-03-03
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:52 pm | |
| Hey Bossman, care to put out a shout for anyone who owns stocks to drop by the stockboard and tell me what they have their shite in. I want to keep an active record of the stock market on the board, since all of that is public knowledge for the most part. - Shin wrote:
- Ingel
21 shares of Livic 20 shares of Zenron
Jyn 416 shares of Division 12 stock
Seiki 700 shares of "Yakuza Corp" | |
| | | Psi Prince Mystic Moogle
Number of posts : 2610 Location : Los Angeles, California Rank : Divine Prince Points : 96 Rep! : 96 Registration date : 2009-03-02
| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:28 pm | |
| Shin, could I hire workers at say 100 Shinny per worker or buy slaves to work for Mandira? - Shin wrote:
- nope, if i let you, then i should let everyone do that. it'd have to be a site rule, etc
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| | | aѕceпxion Ascended Tonberry
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:01 pm | |
| - Jyn - Path of Organization Approval PWC: 40k+ Checkpoint 1: You're a boss. Your organization starts small, but show signs of life with about a dozen members, continue with plans. Jyn has created a core unit within Division 12 that serve as the foundation of his Organization. Requesting 12 unit members. - Shin wrote:
- that's fine
your group gotta name? | |
| | | ShinTre_Admin Admin
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:42 am | |
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| | | Psi Prince Mystic Moogle
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:57 pm | |
| - Psi Prince wrote:
- Shin, could I hire workers at say 100 Shinny per worker or buy slaves to work for Mandira?
- Shin wrote:
- nope, if i let you, then i should let everyone do that. it'd have to be a site rule, etc
I already knew that it would be open to anyone and that's fine. Honestly, I originally had it as a site suggestion, but all I've been seeing is "I'll look into it" meaning that a) you're busy or b) it won't actually come into effect for a month or so. If there's not a fundamental problem with the concept, then it would basically serve as an opening for others to purchase slaves/servants to work for them. Oh and I DO have Carpenters... like 89 of them. Gosh! That hurts... Are you serious about the hair products? We live on a jungle island, we got those Coming to America and Herbal Essence fruits and berries and plant extracts. Everyone will have sexy, silky, smooth hair! In a very non-gay way tho for the men. | |
| | | ShinTre_Admin Admin
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:05 pm | |
| - Psi Prince wrote:
- Psi Prince wrote:
- Shin, could I hire workers at say 100 Shinny per worker or buy slaves to work for Mandira?
- Shin wrote:
- nope, if i let you, then i should let everyone do that. it'd have to be a site rule, etc
Honestly, I originally had it as a site suggestion... good first thought. follow that. further discussion goes to ooc board. thx. | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Sat Jul 17, 2010 10:20 pm | |
| Storyline character ability This guyPolar Destruction An attack made to utterly annihilate large groups of demons, by using the principle of Clasm- however, Alister creates six massive void poles that are all alike- thus creating great rejection of each other, ripping whatever is between them apart rather violently, leaving nothing but torn bits and perhaps blood. Effect: Destructive, range = 15 ft per level. - approved version wrote:
- Polar Destruction (Void, Mastered)
An attack made to utterly annihilate a large group by using the principle of Clasm- however, Alister creates six massive void poles that are all alike- thus creating great rejection of each other, ripping whatever is between them apart rather violently, leaving nothing but torn bits and perhaps blood. Effect: Destructive, range = 10 ft per level. | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Mon Jul 19, 2010 11:58 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Mon Jul 19, 2010 9:35 pm | |
| Makin' another normal character since one of mine died v.v, but I need t' see if the history is fine with ya (It was suggested I place it hyneh)
Rei was very right about all the villagers dying, but his sister had a strong will to live- she wanted to see her brother at least one more time, after the killings. Because of that, she held on and went to 'heaven', though not the heaven of her religion. Within Sprius, most of her time was being spent in a more human form, as that is how people's spirits were treated in her villager's religion. She has lived all these years with little emotion, helping when she could. However, she broke a rule, ten years ago; she prayed to her religion's dragon god until she was caught. For that, she was kicked out and placed into the human realm, living in the Lower Commons ever since. | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Tue Jul 20, 2010 9:43 am | |
| u dun need approval for normal chars xD looks like a kami in the future realm kicked out of heaven that's the way to go these days xD that should be fine | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:13 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:07 pm | |
| I was told zat we actually don't pay exp for teh workers that we get. On this update nyneh I got 11 workers fo' domen. Can I get the exp that I would'a had? =x | |
| | | ShinTre_Admin Admin
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:43 am | |
| @blue - my bad! you were approved way back then xD sry bout that. go ahead @akechdoggy - what's that, 1100 exp you didn't claim? that's fine | |
| | | Antifreke Mystic Moogle
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Jul 29, 2010 10:57 am | |
| I have a couple more ideas to run by you.. let me figure out how I want to do these first.. I still like the Coma paralysis one, but It would be only for storyline purposes.. | |
| | | ShinTre_Admin Admin
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:40 am | |
| lol, make an ooc board just for ur questions then xD | |
| | | Antifreke Mystic Moogle
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:50 pm | |
| Flash Step Cool description thing, basically a "godspeed" form of travel that resembles a lightning bolt for movement. Effect : Bolt movement 15 feet per level | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:46 pm | |
| lemme kno when u have the real tech up w/description and all looks like godspeed w/o the stamina drain set in ur affinity w/a cool effect lol | |
| | | Antifreke Mystic Moogle
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:54 pm | |
| thats exactly what it is ^_^.. and looks FLASHY
Flash Step Taking an alternate route of movement based technique, the breathing from EOTL can be split across the body evenly. When charged, all parts of the body, even to the simplest element, resonate at high speeds, causing the body to move like a lightning bolt. The only trace of the movement seen by the naked eye results in a flashy lightning bolt striking from place to place. Effect : Bolt movement 15 feet per level Drain : Medium, Replaces Godspeed
random question.. Soullines have 5 techs, but the new ones have 10?
Random Duex : Since I am on full time, care if I take the stock market back to weekly? a 10% increase in a month is a really slow progression for economy.. its more realistic once a week. | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:45 pm | |
| - Antifreke wrote:
- thats exactly what it is ^_^.. and looks FLASHY
Flash Step Taking an alternate route of movement based technique, the breathing from EOTL can be split across the body evenly. When charged, all parts of the body, even to the simplest element, resonate at high speeds, causing the body to move like a lightning bolt. The only trace of the movement seen by the naked eye results in a flashy lightning bolt striking from place to place. Effect : Bolt movement 15 feet per level Drain : Medium, Replaces Godspeed
random question.. Soullines have 5 techs, but the new ones have 10?
Random Duex : Since I am on full time, care if I take the stock market back to weekly? a 10% increase in a month is a really slow progression for economy.. its more realistic once a week. @ 1: which have 10? those possessions? @ 2: well, the city's been devastated... there should be heavy losses if we wanna be realistic? either way's fine. @ da custom: i think i want you to do that as a custom combined btw/the movement package since it combined movement + lytning | |
| | | Antifreke Mystic Moogle
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:06 pm | |
| @1. nevermind. im dumb. @2. I agree.. actually.. which is weird.. all of the top ones went down in stock, and the little ones, [mine and the Division], went up. @3. But then I cant get the affinity bonus ^_^ it goes from being a mode of transportation to - shin wrote:
- approved version
Flash Step (Lytning + Movement, Novice) Taking an alternate route of movement based technique, the breathing from EOTL can be split across the body evenly. When charged, all parts of the body, even to the simplest element, resonate at high speeds, causing the body to move like a lightning bolt. The only trace of the movement seen by the naked eye results in a flashy lightning bolt striking from place to place. Effect : range = 15 ft per level, drain is Medium | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Mon Aug 02, 2010 10:51 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Tue Aug 03, 2010 4:01 pm | |
| This be a Soul Line. ● Bloodpetal ●
Special Techniques: | » Bloodpetal Xform (passive) The Bloodpetal is a plant-like creature, a beast with the appearance of a hybrid between an animal and a plant. They possess intelligence, are carnivorous, and occupy many regions of Yochi Furi. Their unique structures present vulnerability to the harsher elements, however provide resistance to others as a result of their nature and ability to ground themselves. While in the presence of sunlight, their stamina may be replenished at a quickened pace thanks to the processes of Photosynthesis. Effect: +10% damage reduction per level from magix attacks of the lightning, water, and earth elements. +50% damage from magix attacks of the fire and ice elements. +1 stamina per level trained while resting in the presence of sunlight. | » Vinez Bestows the creature with the ability to extend up to two vines from their body. They act very much like appendages and possesses the creature's overall strength, making them a powerful tool for binding their prey. The ends open to reveal mouths capable of ingesting organic matter - a wondrous and convenient tool indeed. Effect: Damage and binding strength based on attributes. May extend 10 feet per level. Takes 5 posts to regenerate in case of destruction. (-1 post per level) | » Growth Discovering the application of wilful determination, the Bloodpetal may increase its size and in turn, increase both its offensive and defensive capabilities while their overall agility remains as it was. Effect: May increase body size by 50%. +1 def, +1 str. Mode lasts 2 posts per level. Drain is Fierce. | » Nectar Such a thing has been said to be the food and drink of the gods and mortals who ate it became alike gods themselves. Certainly, such was mere exaggeration; or at least, it most surely was in the case of the Bloodpetals. Despite their savagery, they possess an ability most are unaware of for the durations of their lives. It is likely for that very reason. A nectar may be produced with the sacrifice of their own energy, excreted from the mouths of their viny appendages. It may revive a lifeless Bloodpetal and even those of other species, but since the Bloodpetal must be alive to create it, it is of little use to itself. This is the reason for the ability's scarcity. The energy required to create it can be large, making its ability to act as a food source nigh impossible. However, it is able to close wounds if administered (orally) to itself. Effect: HP sacrificed = HP restored. May revive those KOed. If the user ingests it themselves, if the HP restored trumps the damage that was inflicted, the injury will be healed. No HP will return, however. | » Nova This ability becomes available to only those who have reached the pinnacle of their prowess and understanding of their form for essentially, it is nothing more than an expansion of the Bloodpetal's fundamental abilities. As they still themselves and pool their concentration upon gathering the energy from the sun, they are able to amass a large amount of power before projecting it forth in the form of a concentrated beam of solar energy. Effect: Damage is Destructive +1. Requires 6 posts to charge (-1 per level trained.) Width = 2 feet per level / Range = 10 ft per level. Drain is Fierce. |
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● Bloodpetal ●
Special Techniques:
» Bloodpetal Xform (passive) The Bloodpetal is a plant-like creature, a beast with the appearance of a hybrid between an animal and a plant. They possess intelligence, are carnivorous, and occupy many regions of Yochi Furi. Their unique structures present vulnerability to the harsher elements, however provide resistance to others as a result of their nature and ability to ground themselves. While in the presence of sunlight, their stamina may be replenished at a quickened pace thanks to the processes of Photosynthesis. Effect: +10% damage reduction per level from magix attacks of the lightning, water, and earth elements. +50% damage from magix attacks of the fire and ice elements. +1 stamina per level trained while resting in the presence of sunlight.
» Vinez Bestows the creature with the ability to extend up to two vines from their body. They act very much like appendages and possesses the creature's overall strength, making them a powerful tool for binding their prey. The ends open to reveal mouths capable of ingesting organic matter - a wondrous and convenient tool indeed. Effect: Damage and binding strength based on attributes. May extend 10 feet per level. Takes 5 posts to regenerate in case of destruction. (-1 post per level)
» Growth Discovering the application of wilful determination, the Bloodpetal may increase its size and in turn, increase both its offensive and defensive capabilities while their overall agility remains as it was. Effect: May increase body size by 50%. +1 def, +1 str. Mode lasts 2 posts per level. Drain is Fierce.
» Nectar Such a thing has been said to be the food and drink of the gods and mortals who ate it became alike gods themselves. Certainly, such was mere exaggeration; or at least, it most surely was in the case of the Bloodpetals. Despite their savagery, they possess an ability most are unaware of for the durations of their lives. It is likely for that very reason. A nectar may be produced with the sacrifice of their own energy, excreted from the mouths of their viny appendages. It may revive a lifeless Bloodpetal and even those of other species, but since the Bloodpetal must be alive to create it, it is of little use to itself. This is the reason for the ability's scarcity. The energy required to create it can be large, making its ability to act as a food source nigh impossible. However, it is able to close wounds if administered (orally) to itself. Effect: HP sacrificed = HP restored. May revive those KOed. If the user ingests it themselves, if the HP restored trumps the damage that was inflicted, the injury will be healed. No HP will return, however.
» Nova This ability becomes available to only those who have reached the pinnacle of their prowess and understanding of their form for essentially, it is nothing more than an expansion of the Bloodpetal's fundamental abilities. As they still themselves and pool their concentration upon gathering the energy from the sun, they are able to amass a large amount of power before projecting it forth in the form of a concentrated beam of solar energy. Effect: Damage is Destructive +1. Requires 6 posts to charge (-1 per level trained.) Width = 2 feet per level / Range = 10 ft per level. Drain is Fierce.
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Aug 04, 2010 10:09 am | |
| good shit bout using my format! why can't more ppl be like you!? xD here's the butchered approved version: - Quote :
- ● Bloodpetal ●
Special Techniques:
» Bloodpetal Xform (passive) The Bloodpetal is a plant-like creature, a beast with the appearance of a hybrid between an animal and a plant. They possess intelligence, are carnivorous, and occupy many regions of Yochi Furi. Their unique structures present vulnerability to the harsher elements, however provide resistance to others as a result of their nature and ability to ground themselves. While in the presence of sunlight, their stamina may be replenished at a quickened pace thanks to the processes of Photosynthesis. Effect: +10% damage reduction per level from magix attacks of the lightning, water, and earth elements. +50% damage from magix attacks of the fire and ice elements. +1 stamina per level trained while resting in the presence of sunlight.
» Vinez Bestows the creature with the ability to extend up to two vines from their body. They act very much like appendages and possesses the creature's overall strength, making them a powerful tool for binding their prey. The ends open to reveal mouths capable of ingesting organic matter - a wondrous and convenient tool indeed. If the vines are attacked, the HP does not reduce from the host body HP, but the vines can be destroyed. Effect: dmg & binding strength = attributes, range = 10 ft per level, HP = 50% user's max, regeneration = 5 posts (-1 post per level)
» Growth Discovering the application of willful determination, the Bloodpetal may increase its size and in turn, increase both its offensive and defensive capabilities while their overall agility remains as it was. Effect: body size increases up to 10% per level, +20% def & str per level (up to +1 attribute level), invokes mode, drain is Fierce.
» Nectar Such a thing has been said to be the food and drink of the gods and mortals who ate it became alike gods themselves. Certainly, such was mere exaggeration; or at least, it most surely was in the case of the Bloodpetals. Despite their savagery, they possess an ability most are unaware of for the durations of their lives. It is likely for that very reason. A nectar may be produced with the sacrifice of their own energy, excreted from the mouths of their viny appendages. It may revive a lifeless Bloodpetal and even those of other species, but since the Bloodpetal must be alive to create it, it is of little use to itself. This is the reason for the ability's scarcity. The energy required to create it can be large, making its ability to act as a food source nigh impossible. However, it is able to close wounds if administered (orally) to itself. If the user ingests it themselves a injury will be healed, but no HP will return, however. Effect: HP sacrificed = HP restored, revives K/O, revives death at perfected.
» Nova This ability becomes available to only those who have reached the pinnacle of their prowess and understanding of their form for essentially, it is nothing more than an expansion of the Bloodpetal's fundamental abilities. As they still themselves and pool their concentration upon gathering the energy from the sun, they are able to amass a large amount of power before projecting it forth in the form of a concentrated beam of solar energy. Effect: dmg = up to control level +1, charging posts = dmg # (-1 per level trained), width = 2 feet per level, range = 10 ft per level, drain is Fierce. | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Aug 04, 2010 1:31 pm | |
| Rei'll soon be gathering workers to build up Harlem. So I'll need permission lyke it says =x | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Wed Aug 04, 2010 9:40 pm | |
| - Quote :
- This be another Soul Line! ^_~
● Tortle ●
Special Techniques: | » Tortle Xform (passive) The Tortles were a species of light blue, typically sea-bound bipedal creatures resembling a hybrid between a turtle and a human with its most notable feature being the hard shell on its back. This shell forms and solidifies on its back after birth, however is strangely not a permanent fixture. Since their physiology simulates their human counterparts, it works in their favour. In time, they learn to both dismiss and create it, and even manipulate it. Since it offers protection, however, they were rarely seen without their shells. Some who are descendant of these creatures may be able to call forth this transformation. Effect: +20% def per level (up to +1 attribute level). Attain a shell with a density = 3. Usual replenishing rules apply. | » Hydro Cannon Their means of water conjuration bears similarity to those of a draconic ancestry. Ostensibly, its workings require an action resembling the drawing of a breath. Often, their body expands slightly as the initial quantity of water is created and harboured within. From there, they expel it forth in the form of a large torrent. The strength of this technique typically acts as a display of their overall strength. Effect: +1 DMG per level trained (up to Fierce). Force = DMG +1. Width = 1 foot per level. Range = 10 feet per level. Repeating the cost allows the technique to continue uninterrupted. Drain is Fierce. | » Shell Play This ability displays a Tortle's prowess over the creation and manipulation of their shells. Through their pores, they secrete a substance that rapidly solidifies and forms into their carapace. Time spent in practice results in the ability to create a shell just as strong as their initial and eventually, they are able to spawn one of even greater fortification. Its partial removal and creation as well as adjustment so they may withdraw into its depths where they may fully shield themselves from hazards. Effect: May create shell. +20% density per level trained (up to 6 density). 10 stamina per density to create/repair, -5 per level trained. | » Natural-born Swimmer (passive) Unlike their apparent ancestors, the Tortles are endothermic and don't possess the slow metabolisms they would be expected to. Their astonishing resistance to cold makes it possible for them to brave just about any ocean of any location. Of course, their need for air is more apparent than those of the poikilothermic class. As they spend more time in the water, their proficiency and skill manoeuvring within it increases as does the length they are able to hold their breath. Effect: +20% spd & agi per level (up to +1 attribute level) while in water. Can hold breath for 12 minutes per level trained. | » Hydrageddon Perhaps their most unorthodox ability, the Tortle withdraws into their shell before utilizing a high-powered version of Hydro Cannon within its confines. This results in 5 separate streams that jettison from each opening within the shell. However, their affinity for the water element is utilized to influence it. Putting this to use, the water is manipulated to form a tornado with themselves positioned at its center. This is undoubtedly the Tortle's most devastating and destructive ability and those who had mastered it are regarded as those to be respected amidst their species. Effect: Damage is Destructive. Suction strength is Strong. Repeating the cost allows the technique to continue uninterrupted. Range = 15 feet per level trained. Moves at speed attribute. |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:05 am | |
| approvado'd version - Quote :
- ● Tortle ●
Special Techniques: » Tortle Xformation (passive) The Tortles were a species of light blue, typically sea-bound bipedal creatures resembling a hybrid between a turtle and a human with its most notable feature being the hard shell on its back. This shell forms and solidifies on its back after birth, however is strangely not a permanent fixture. Since their physiology simulates their human counterparts, it works in their favor. Since it offers protection, however, they were rarely seen without their shells. Some who are descendant of these creatures may be able to call forth this transformation. Effect: +20% def per level (up to +1 attribute level), shell density = 3, shell creation requires 6 posts (-1 post per level)
» Hydro Cannon Their means of water conjuration bears similarity to those of a draconic ancestry. Ostensibly, its workings require an action resembling the drawing of a breath. Often, their body expands slightly as the initial quantity of water is created and harbored within. From there, they expel it forth in the form of a large torrent. The strength of this technique typically acts as a display of their overall strength. Effect: dmg = +1 per level (up to Fierce), force = dmg +1, width = 1 ft per level, range = 10 ft per level, drain is Fierce
» Shell Play This ability displays a Tortle's prowess over the creation and manipulation of their shells. Through their pores, they secrete a substance that rapidly solidifies and forms into their carapace. Time spent in practice results in the ability to create a shell just as strong as their initial and eventually, they are able to spawn one of even greater fortification. Its partial removal and creation as well as adjustment so they may withdraw into its depths where they may fully shield themselves from hazards. Effect: +10% shell density per level (up to +2 density) with build/repair rate based on Xformation shell creation
» Natural-born Swimmer (passive) Unlike their apparent ancestors, the Tortles are endothermic and don't possess the slow metabolisms they would be expected to. Their astonishing resistance to cold makes it possible for them to brave just about any ocean of any location. Of course, their need for air is more apparent than those of the poikilothermic class. As they spend more time in the water, their proficiency and skill maneuvering within it increases as does the length they are able to hold their breath. Effect: +20% speed & dex per level (up to +1 attribute level) while in water. Can hold breath for 12 minutes per level trained.
» Hydrageddon Perhaps their most unorthodox ability, the Tortle withdraws into their shell before utilizing a high-powered version of Hydro Cannon within its confines. This results in 5 separate streams that jettison from each opening within the shell. However, their skill in the water element is utilized to influence it. Putting this to use, the water is manipulated to form a tornado with themselves positioned at its center. This is undoubtedly the Tortle's most devastating and destructive ability and those who had mastered it are regarded as those to be respected amidst their species. Effect: dmg = Destructive, suction strength/bind = Strong, range = 15 ft per level note - most mag techs can be held automatically for continued sta cost, most commonly used w/mag. lock ups etc | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Thu Aug 05, 2010 4:17 pm | |
| - Akechi wrote:
- Rei'll soon be gathering workers to build up Harlem. So I'll need permission lyke it says =x
go ahead | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:28 am | |
| Heyas. In advance, I apologize if this isn't the respective board to make this question, though I think I came to the right spot. Would it be conceivable for me to basically have a sword {rather, when I acquire one}, a normal one {claymore-esque, though perhaps slightly larger}, with a spirit it in? This addition wouldn't particularly serve any purpose besides for the purpose of RP and for the sake of having the character which I have intention to make, their story to be valid. Literally, it cannot talk, it doesn't offer any spiritual abilities, not summoning a spirit or transfiguring the weapon into the spirit, nothing, not even communication between the user and it, and not the ability to reference it in future techniques. It wouldn't differentiate any from an actual normal sword.
Or, would it be possible, for a Summoner (Possession), to have the summon the sword specifically? I ask this in the form of a request/something requiring approval due to my current notion that the summon taking on the form of a sword may require density and the like to fulfil its role as an actual weapon. | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:06 pm | |
| a sword w/a spirit can be handled in the sentient quest. mold it to you. if you want to rp having a normal sword and say it has a spirit in it it's fine so long as it functions as a normal sword
for the sword summon...there's actually a quest for that i think bonding or something lets you summon a sword if you're trying to give the summon sword possession summon attributes (i.e. flying sword etc) then that'll be a lil harder. a custom should be able to work for it.
not sure if i fully understood what u asked for, so lemme know if i'm way off base or if this ain't whatcha mean. | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Fri Aug 20, 2010 9:34 pm | |
| Custom Taint Request: Snow Le'pard - Quote :
- Snow Le'pard Xformation: Symptoms of this Xformation include pronounced canines; rosettes around the eyes, hands, feet, and lower back; a thick, spotted tail similar to a snow leopard's; sharpened, claw-like nails; and pointed, fur covered ears. The subject's voice often becomes softer and more melodic, though he or she gains an enhanced ability to express himself or herself in purrs, mews, growls, and wails.
Cool Hunting: The Xformation gives the user strong predatory instincts, adding the ability to feed off of its prey's suffering and weakness. For every 20% of damage on the target, the user's melee and weapon attacks gain +1 damage.
Insulation: The user can instantly manifest a barrier of cold that can buffer against fire, ice, or temperature-based attacks, reducing them by one level of effectiveness.
Grimtooth: Adds a bite of cold to any attack, lending it +1 ice elemental damage
Snow Ghosting: Enables the user to disappear or reappear anywhere ice or snow is present. Strong drain per turn. | |
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| Subject: Re: Shin's Admin Review/Permission's Board Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:42 pm | |
| here's the approved version on that. lemme kno if this is what u were lookin for: - approved version wrote:
- gradin this as a site taint.
Snow Le'pard Xformation (passive) Symptoms of this Xformation include pronounced canines; rosettes around the eyes, hands, feet, and lower back; a thick, spotted tail similar to a snow leopard's; sharpened, claw-like nails; and pointed, fur covered ears. The subject's voice often becomes softer and more melodic, though he or she gains an enhanced ability to express himself or herself in purrs, mews, growls, and wails. Effect: hybrid communicate though sounds rather than words (20% lingual perception clarity per level), 2% elemental resistance per level
Cool Hunting (passive) The Xformation gives the user strong predatory instincts, adding the ability to feed off of its prey's suffering and weakness. Because of this, the more the user damages its prey using up close and personal melee and weapon melee attacks, the more ravenous the user will become, thus increasing its damage potential against that target. Effect: for every 50% of damage rendered, the user's melee/weapon attacks increase +1 (up to a total of 10), damage limit for increase reduces 6% per level trained.
Insulation This ability allows the user to instantly manifest a barrier or aura of cold to surround their body. This barrier can act like a buffer against fire, ice, or temperature-based attacks, reducing them by one level of effectiveness. Effect: reduces effectiveness of fire and ice attacks -1, drain is Strong
Grimtooth The Le'pard uses its ability to manipulate cold and combines it on the fly with physical attacks. This technique allows the user to imbues a bite of cold to the attack, lending it ice elemental damage. Effect: +1 to physical attacks, drain is Strong
Snow Ghosting Ghosting refers to a type of cold teleportation that allows the user to basically disappear and reappear around areas where ice or snow is present. With this, their body disappears into the the snow or ice they are on, and they are able to move to and reappear somewhere else within the snow or ice. The Le'pard's movement is restricted by a connection of the medium in which it's moving. Effect: drain is Strong (per post), ghosting travel speed based on attributes | |
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